Minor ThreePrick the Feeble

[Minor ThreePrick]

[atrb=border,0,btable][atrb=width,414,btable][cs=2] Minor ThreePrick the Feeble I may be small and feeble…but don’t underestimate my abilities -Theme Song- soundcloud.com/marceau84/dream-chasers-how-to-train
[cs=2] [style=text-align: center; font-family: century gothic; font-size: 16px; border-bottom: solid 2px #222222; margin-bottom: 4px; text-transform: center;]FULL NAME Hello, my name is Minor ThreePrick the Feeble But mostly around Berk I am called weakling and sickly only because of the way my body appearance is; but what they don't know is that I have that hidden strength when my physical appearance doesn't show it. ORIGINS I originated from the ThreePrick’s Clan. Yeah it’s a long gone clan but I’m one of only a few left surviving, but it doesn’t mean my clan was weak like I seem to be from the other vikings; they were a hardy strong-willed Clan, doing what they thought was best for one another. Even sacrificing themselves in the lines of battle to protect what they knew best; to keep family safe and loved ones secure. I am currently 17 years old now, born in the late spring when the flowers are all open and blooming. My parents are no longer with me they had been taken in a battle a while ago and I was raised by my Uncle Barliy ThreePrick the Steady, he taught me all I know on how to fight without the advantage of muscles and power, but with quick movements and evading attacks. I am completly blind in the left eye, it's a light pale blue color and a scar runs through it. I had accquired this scar from wandering off on my own when my uncle didn't know I left the house. I had been spooked from the sounds of the woods; it was dark at this point and I was scared. I couldn't see where i was going, tripped over a boulder and had tumbled down a step slop of the forest, my left eye getting hit hard by a sharp edge of a split rock. When I was found by the morning, passed out and bleeding on the ground, my Uncle cared for me. And he later told me to make the scar a reminder to be brave, not a coward. GENDER & SEXUALITY I am a male...if you haven’t already guessed that. I may not be fit like a male Viking should, but at least I can be recodnized as a male. My sexual orientation leans on both sides. I have a fascination for both genders; but secretly keep it away from anyone. OCCUPATION I am a writer, I’ve wrote many stories from my own imagination. I have a few masterpieces in the Great Hall, some on plants and different changes of the weather and why it’s all like this. But the current story I’m working on is about different types of Dragons, a mini book from the 'Book of Dragons'. I am good at Combat, but my motivation is strike while the Iron is hot, to wait for the opportunity to strike, then give it all you got. TRAITS [/style]
[atrb=valign,top][atrb=border,0,true][atrb=width,207] STRENGTHS: ▪ Combat ▪ Evading attacks ▪ Swimming, am able to be submerged in the water for a long time ▪ My hot temper can get me through a few fights	[atrb=valign,top][atrb=border,0,true][atrb=width,207] WEAKNESSES: ▪ Hard Blows to the face ▪ Conversation, I’ve never really socialized with the other Vikings ▪ Learning within a group, I am more of a one-on-one learner
[atrb=valign,top][atrb=border,0,true][atrb=width,207] LIKES: ▪ The Twilight hours ▪ Writing ▪ Solace ▪ Swimming in open water	[atrb=valign,top][atrb=border,0,true][atrb=width,207] DISLIKES: ▪ Being trapped ▪ Being called weak and fragile; even though I know I'm not ▪ Wild Fire, it’s scared me the first time and I cannot handle being near it. ▪ Lossing fights
[atrb=valign,top][atrb=border,0,true][atrb=width,207] FEARS: ▪ Fire ▪ Seeing death in others ▪ Others asking if I'm ok when I'm clearly hurt	[atrb=valign,top][atrb=border,0,true][atrb=width,207] AMBITIONS: ▪ I wish to be a great warrior one day. To lead an army behind me and leave a Legend for all to tell when I pass away from old age. To be remembered that being small, means that you can still take the big boys on
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I am quite the rebellious type. I’ll do the exact opposite that I am told and go about my own business. Unless it’s of dire emergency, I won’t do anything for you unless something is in it for me. I have a huge temper about me; I will get angry and don’t think I’ll just walk it off. You may get a few punches to the gut and jaw; places I know where it hurts. But I’m not all tough and mean. I do have my sweet side when nothing is provoking me; I’ve shown this to only a selective few and one to a scaly.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

I am about 4”9 and weigh about 126 pounds. I have auburn red hair with a lighter brown in the mix. My skin is pale in color since I’m mostly a night person. I wear a thick coat of juvenile Ox fur as a jacket and a greenish-brown undershirt. I have strings around my arms that intertwine around my fingers. My boots are quite small and a dirty brown color, and pants are a deep brownish black. Around my neck is a necklace of a Tooth my Father had gotten from a deceased carcass of a Dragon. I don’t know what type it was but it’s pretty sharp and never can break. My eyes are two different colors; my right eye is a deep pine green, whilst the left one is a pale blue because I am blind in that eye

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FIGHT TO THE DEATH

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WEAPON(S) OF CHOICE:

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▪ Three pronged sword. Looks like a normal sword, but a small lever at the base of the Handle will reveal curved blades going upwards, like a trident. [/div][/td]

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FIGHTING STYLE:

▪ Strike while the Iron is Hot
▪ Wait for the perfect opportunity

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DRAGON DESCRIPTION & PERSONALITY:

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KEYWORD IN RULES

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CyanTheFury created Minor ThreePrick

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[REDKITEBAIT]

Sorry, I'm back at school so I don't have as much time as I'd like to review things, so here goes:

Once again, the Night Fury thing applies after 150 posts. You could make your character dragonless until then (like I did) and then discover their dragon once you've hit that goal Or you could use a different dragon, Night Furies aren't the only awesome dragons!

Besides, I wouldn't consider a dragon 'trained', if he hasn't even properly seen the beast yet...

I feel like you're confusing physical strength and mental strength. He can be as intelligent as he wants, but if he doesn't have an ounce of strength, he'll eat the dust regardless of his IQ. Being weak isn't a positively view trait in the Viking culture. I mean, look how Hiccup was treated He'd be easily overpowered in combat, the whole dodging thing is only really good on 1on1, and in the midst of battle I don't think there's be enough room to jump about like a grasshopper.

The waters of Scandinavia is cold. You couldn't last long in the water, especially underwater in those temperatures. Also the water is brimming with dragons, so it probably might not be wise either...

Everyone fears death and losing someone they love. Be more imaginative

I don't think I'm going to allow that secret with the Night Furies. They rely heavily on trust, and if your 'trained' dragon won't even reveal itself i don't think a wild one is going to come out of the blue and eat out of your hands just like that.

Why would someone who's physically weak resort to violence when angry? It's also prbably a good idea to be more extraverted - interactivity is the key here in RolePlaying, if your character likes to be a loner then he won't run into anyone and then of course you'll have a hard time finding someone to RP with, just saying

Hair colour should be natural. his hair can be red, in the natural sense i.e. Ginger, and streaks... isn't the right word, it sets alarm bells off. It'd be better if you said something like 'auburn', or 'a textured rust-coloured hair'

If he has rips in his trousers, he should get them replaced. It was'nt the fashion back then, also Berk is chilly. And finally we don't really allow heterochromia. If one person is allowed it, then everyone is allowed it, and to be realistic we don't allow that, sorry.

If he is blind in his left eye, how did he end up that way? Write that in the history Does he wear an eyepatch? Does he still have his eye?

I'll check this again once it's been fixed, thank you for being patient

[Minor ThreePrick]

Refixed it

[REDKITEBAIT]

You are missing 1 point in likes and dislikes, the minimum is 4.
You need to change your display name to that of your character's.

You haven't fixed the following:
Losing someone you love is too common a fear.
No to Heterochromia, only one eye colour!
You haven't explained in the history how he lost his sight in one eye.
I'll have to get back to Pimey (or you can ask him if you catch him in the cbox) About the Night Fury head on the shield? Pime plays Kenna the blacksmith, so you might want to run with him whether such a design is feasable for her character to make.

Also another addition as a suggestion rather than a comment: I feel Dragonologist might suit this guy better? But up to you, I guess

[Minor ThreePrick]

Dragonologist? Is that like what Fishlegs does?

[Minor ThreePrick]

And I fixed it again

[REDKITEBAIT]

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Everything looks ok now; you may now RP (though still, i think you should discuss with Pime2 who plays Kenna about the shield just in case)

And just change your display name to that of your character's

Have fun!

Please:
1. Link your profile to your signature.
2. Add yourself to the MEMBER DIRECTORY
3. Add your FC/PB to the LIST if you need to.
4. Add yourself to the POPULATION.
5. Get SCHEMING!

[Minor ThreePrick]

Thankyou