Rockhead

[hunte890]

NAME:Rockhead.
ALIAS:Rock.
AGE:14.
GENDER:Male.
STANDING:Viking-in-Training.
SEXUAL ORIENTATION:Straight.



LIKES:
Girls(Teenege Boy).
Dragon(Dragon are awesome).
Fighting(He is born to Fight).
Training(Like i said he is born to fight why wouldnt he want to train).

DISLIKES:
Evil Dragons(Kill if the dragons evil).
Water(He hates swimming he hates water).
Sitting all day being lazy(He likes to spend his day trainig).
Cowards(He hates cowards).
STRENGTHS:
Weapons(He is really skilled with weaopns if he fought with a weapon it woul be trouble).
Fists(Rockhead is like an expert at Close Combat).
Dragons(He is awesome with the beasts but he dosent have one).
Strenght(He has extraordinary Strenght).
WEAKNESSES:
Lightning(He is afraid of Lightning).
Running(He isint that fast because he mostly specializes in Strenght).
Girls(He is really weak against girls and will show mercy escpecially the ones he likes).
Water(He hates water and swimming).

FEARS:
Diying(Most people are).
Plaiying rough(He is afraid he is going to hurt someone badly).
Swimming(He is afraid he will drown but he can swim a little he hates swimmin anyway).
Lightning.
AMBITIONS:
Get a Girlfriend.
Be a Legendary Viking.
Greatest Viking of all time.
Get a Dragon.
SECRETS:
He has a crush on some viking girls.
His Dad and Mom(Ashamed to be their offspring has a great hatred for them).



PERSONALITY:
Rockhead is rather Aloof, he is silent and he is one of the most intelligent Vikings you could now.
Rockhead never smiles he only grins.
This Viking likes Challenges such as Fighting.
So to say Rockhead is cold, Aloof, cool, calm, and collected.
Rockhead rarely shows emotion, evrytime his fears happen he still shows no emotion, but he still has fear inside him.
This young viking also likes interesting people, but he looks at them in a distance, Rockhead is mysterious and he would only show his emotions to the girl that loved him.



OVERALL PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION: (Face, hair, build, clothes, special markings, height, weight, etc.)
Face:Rockhead has kind of a round face, and a little pointy nose it isisint really pointy, and he has eyes that are spindrift, a mix between turquoise and sea foam green.The pupils of his eyes are kind invisible.Rockhead has no eyebrows.He has Racoon-like black eye rings.
Markings:He has Racoon-like black eye rings.
Hair:short, spiky hair that is brick-red.
Skin:He has pale skin.
Build:He has the same Build as Hiccup but he is a little more muscular than him.
Clothes:Rockhead has clothes the same as Hiccup.


HISTORY: Rockhead had a really bad history his history was terrible his parents kept hitting Rockhead, and yelling at him, and torrturing him hoping that would make him stronger, but no it made him have hatred for them.Only his Uncle loved him and cared about him.One day Rockhead's dad and mom was triying to kill a Night Fury for food, but the Night Fury killed his parents so Rockhead's Uncle took care of him, trained him, and teached him about Viking Historys, including Hiccup and Tothless Legend.But one day Rockhead's uncle dyed because of a Viking Mission, and Rockhead was all alone.Rockhead then started his special training by himself he never stopped always triying to be the perfect warrior, he never went to dragon training he trained all alone.Evrytime he went to the village, Vikings in training would always make fun of him for not having a dragon, and for not going to Dragon Training.
Rockhead was tired of people making fun of him of not having a dragon, so he went to the Toothless Forest.
Rockhead kept walking and searching for hours, but he couldnt find anything but sudenlly he found a Gronckle.
The Gronckle attacked him, Rockhead Viking instincts kicked in, and he killed the Gronckle with difficulty.He got back to the village safe and he then decided to enter Dragon Training, and hope to have a dragon as he always wondered into places.
PARENTS, FRIENDS, OTHER FAMILY:
Pignose(Dad):Killed by Night Fury
Firepig(Mom):Killed by Night Fury



WEAPON OF CHOICE:Axe,Sword,Shield,Hammer,His Close Combat and Strenght


KEYWORD IN RULES:
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[banditfly]

-Needs three more dislikes.

-Expand on your personality and history. Be more detailed.

-Please proofread. This is a very literate RP and we're not going to tolerate illiteracy. Use commas and periods; a lot of your sentences are run-on. Spell check for typos and try to arrange your sentences so that they make more sense.

[hunte890]

Ok Sir.Milk i edited it i am ready to get aceepted

[banditfly]

Mm... Do you have a typing program? I suggest typing your posts there from now on to fix this capitalization confusion you have going on as well as fix your typos.

It's better. I just have one question. Why did he kill the Gronckle if he wanted a dragon as a pet?

[hunte890]

Sorry to say this but No Sir and he killed the Gronckle because it attacked him and wanted to kill him.

[aya]

Since you do not have an effective word processor, might I recommend using the Spell Check when you reply. It can be found near the "Post Reply" button. It only fixes, of course, spelling but it can certainly help. That or possibly consider using Mozilla Firefox, as it has a built-in spell check. Should you take this alternative then be sure to read up on it, but I wouldn't mind helping you out~ I highly recommend the latter--my own spelling can be atrocious sometimes or I just don't bother, lol--because it is residual and can be used on any site's "typing area."

Neither of these help with sentence structure(but Firefox fixes capitalization! ^w^), but technical error does not excuse for lack thereof. As Milk mentioned, this RP is literate. Everyone of us on this site can understand typos and mishaps every once in a while. Although if it is a constant occurrence, then grammar check-ups would be suggested. Also keep in mind that OOC is open for everyone with an account--whether accepted or not. Be sure to respond there if you have any questions.

I am fine accepting your application as is, just so I can get a word in before Milk comes around. xD

And I hope what I have said does not deter you from this amazing site and I cannot stress enough that nothing is personal or biased. I am only meeting standards for the site.

[hunte890]

Hehehe its ok i know i will like this site oh and i did the spellcheck i think there was no error

[aya]

Accepted~

I don't know if maybe your computer may incompatible, but I just ran the Spell Check myself on your biography. I didn't change anything, but I found out that it helps with apostrophe placement.

I like the idea you got going for your character and I can't wait to see what you can get started. I saw that Faylne was in your sights, lol. xD Good luck to both of you!

Happy Role-playing~

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