Madhawk's Form

[carodacat]

NAME: Madhawk the insane butterfly
ALIAS: Madhawk or Hawk
AGE: 15
GENDER: Male
STANDING: Viking in training
SEXUAL ORIENTATION: Straight


LIKES: Dragon-spotting, flying, his dragon, solitude
DISLIKES: Crowds, Hysterians, swimming, other people
STRENGTHS:
Dragonese: He speaks Dragonese, but not fluently.
Strength: He can lift 3 terrible terrors (just about).
Eyesight: He has extraordinary eyesight and can see people on Berk even when he is alongside clouds when flying.
Flying: He can fly well on dragons.
WEAKNESSES:
Hydrophobic: He can swim slightly, but if completely submerged he will stop moving.
Claustrophobic: If in a crowd after 5 minutes he will go completely insane.
Shy: He is incredibly shy and when he meets someone he will probably run away.
His dragon: He can't fly on his dragon and he is with it at all times.
FEARS: His Dragon will run away or die, he drowns, He gets surrounded by people or dragons, he has to kill a dragon.
AMBITIONS: Becomes a Viking, learns to speak fluent dragonese, finds out who his father is, makes a friend.
SECRETS: His axe is stolen, he likes Wolf


PERSONALITY: Hawk prefers to be left alone, but maybe that is because he finds it hard to make friends. He normally spends his time wondering who is father is and whether he will ever meet him. He looks forward to change because he feels it will bring good. He tries to make friends but a lot of people tend to avoid him. Maybe it’s the fact he has no parents. Maybe it’s because he is very shy. Most likely because he snaps at everyone. But he could make friends easier if he was more optomistic. He tries to master his fears but he can't. Swimming was out of the question. He tries to be brave but he finds it hard.

OVERALL PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION:
Face: He has a thin face with a curved nose. His eyes are dark brown.
Hair: His hair is jet-black and is long; it reaches his shoulders and he has to keep flicking his fringe out of his eyes.
Build: He is fairly muscled, especially in his arms.
Clothes: He dresses like Hiccup, but his clothes are ripped and second-hand.
Markings: In the middle of his chest is a small but deep scar where an axe was pushed into him (more in story)
Height & Weight: He is fairly tall, about 5”9. He weighs about 120 pounds.

HISTORY: This is the story of my life. Parts of it even I don’t know. My origin is a mystery even to me.
The first record of me is 15 years ago, when I was 1 week old. People say you can’t remember that far back, but I can vividly remember being carried through a snowstorm by who I assume is my mother. They say she staggered into the town hall – or whatever they call it nowadays – and gave me to the Chief. Her last were “This is Madhawk the insane butterfly, son of Madhawk the insane moth. Please take care of him.” Then she collapsed on the floor, for she had pneumonia, and died the next day a midnight.
I was raised by the village, living at this house one month and that one the next. I wish day and night that someone would come forward to adopt me. Nobody did. Even the children kept their distance. Nobody abused me- but they weren’t taking care of me.
When I was 13 they told me everything- and I knew why I had no mother. I was about to start training and I badly needed a dragon. Yet how could I get one? I was too young to hunt for one myself and it seemed unlikely anyone would find one for me.
So I planned to run away. I say planned- I just packed some food and some clothes and headed out into the forest, following the path my mother took all those years ago. The only way I could tell I was going in the right direction is the story they told me, of how my mother appeared from the forest edge, near the training area.
It was that day I found my dragon.
I was walking along, wondering what she looked like, whether her eyes were bright blue like mine, when it fell from the sky. It was a dragon. Well, I say fell from the sky. It makes it sound like fate. But maybe it wasn’t.
You see, I was near the training area, and I heard a yell as someone threw an axe. Next thing I knew, something had landed on top of me and the axe was digging into my chest. With great effort, I prised the axe out of my skin and threw it aside. Thankfully, the cut wasn’t too deep, but I knew it would stay with me forever. The Thing rolled off of me, bleeding. I realised the axe had dug into this creature as well.
I had saved the life of a dragon without meaning to.
I still have the axe two years later. I remember the day I saved the Night Fury. It was a beautiful creature, yet so dangerous, and at the same time, it was injured. I tried to help it but it ran away. I cursed under my breath. I had foun the rarest dragon ever- and lost him.
Maybe dragons were not meant t be with me. I considered just straving myself. I was certianly nearing death because of my cut. But one day a terrible terror came along and saw me slumped against a tree, lifeless. It licked my wond I slowly came back to conciousness.
After a week, I knew I had to return home, so I bid the Terrible Terror goodbye and set off. About half an hour later, I looked round and saw he was following me. No matter how fast I walked or how loudly I shouted, he kept stalking me. Eventually I just ignored him, but when I let myself into my home (an abandoned house with a burnt off roof) I watched, half-annoyed half-amused, as he followed me in. I gave up and let him stay with me. He seemed the only friend I was going to make around here.
I called him Fury to remind me of the dragon I had lost, and the pain I had gone through. I’m 15 now, and Fury is still with me. I’m so glad he is my friend. I have a feeling he feels the same way about me.

PARENTS, FRIENDS, OTHER FAMILY:
Mother: Unknown name – Deceased
Father: Madhawk the insane moth – Status unknown

WEAPON OF CHOICE: His stolen axe, made of silver, on which he carved himself on one blade and Fury on the other.

*He owns a 'Terror Flyer', a sort of hang-glider he uses to fly in. Fury is tied to the front and steers it.

DRAGON NAME: Fury
DRAGON TYPE: Terrible Terror
APPEARANCE: Fury is the standard green Terror, but hs tail ends without a fork, and he lacks any horns.
DRAGON PERSONALITY: He is untrustworthy and short-tempered, but never around Madhawk. He is cute when he has to be.
DRAGON TECHNIQUES: It is unknown if Fury has any techniques because he never seems to use the same move again. However, his most common approach is to leap onto their face and claw them.

KEYWORD IN RULES:Toothless

[ABYSS]

"I was walking along, wondering what she looked like, whether her eyes were bright blue like mine, when it fell from the sky. It was a dragon. Well, I say fell from the sky. It makes it sound like fate. But maybe it wasn’t.
You see, I was near the training area, and I heard a yell as someone threw an axe. Next thing I knew, something had landed on top of me and the axe was digging into my chest. With great effort, I prised the axe out of my skin and threw it aside. Thankfully, the cut wasn’t too deep, but I knew it would stay with me forever. The Thing rolled off of me, bleeding. I realised the axe had dug into this creature as well. "

This part confused me.

1) If someone takes an axe to the chest, they're dead, no questions asked.
2) How the heck was a dragon with an axe in it on you, so you had the axe in you as well? That makes no sense to me...

3) You seem to have a bit of likeness to Hiccup in your application. Clothes? Face? Hair?
4) What does 7.5 stone convert to in pounds?
5) Please refrain from writing your history or any RPs in first person.
6) Please expand on your personality
7) This is...generally, not the level I am looking for Night Fury recievers.

[carodacat]

1) It wasn't really in the chest. It was stuck in the dragon and not much touched him, it was more like a scratch than anything.
2) You know axes have a blade on each side? Well, one blade was in the dragon, the other was out. That was the side that scratched him.
3) Yeah... Madhawk has a rounder face, darker brown hair and blue eyes, though. And he only dresses like Hiccup because thats what most of the kids in the movie wear, a top and a fleece thing. Except Madhawk's fleece is made of wool.
4) I'm not sure, but I think it is 105 pounds. That sounds not very much... is it?
5) I wasn't planning to write any RP in person. A few days before I joined I looked through people's applications to see who I was playing with and what standard I had to write to and I read Shadow's form. The history was in first person and I thought it was very effective.
6) PERSONALITY: Hawk prefers to be left alone, but maybe that is because he finds it hard to make friends. He normally spends his time wondering who is father is and whether he will ever meet him. He looks forward to change because he feels it will bring good. He tries to make friends but a lot of people tend to avoid him. Maybe it’s the fact he has no parents. Maybe it’s because he is very shy. But Hawk is very optimistic and knows there are some friends out there. He tries to master his fears but he can't. Swimming was out of the question. He tries to be brave but he finds it hard. Training is one thing he likes. It's a chance for him to try and make friends and be with his dragon at the same time.

[ABYSS]

4) if it is 105 pounds, Im thinking 5-10 pounds heavier should be good. Thats a bit light for a boy his age. lol

5)Yes, Shadow's was. Though I personally am not opposed to first-person histories, I try to ward people off from it because about 80% (possibly more) of the RPing community prefers to RP in third person.

6)Please modify your original post of your application with that new personality so I may give it another look-over.

[ABYSS]

...er..no offense or anything, but do you not know how to modify an original post?
Thats why I asked you to modify your original post, not re-post it modified. XD

And again, This is not what I am looking for in a Night Fury recipient's application. Please choose another type of dragon.

[carodacat]

Buuuut you didn't say anything when Wolf did that.
Modified.
And, no offense, but why do lots of people have Night Fury's when your rule says only a few can have them? And if only some people can have Night Fury's then why is Shadows incredibly rare White Fury that turns dark at night and can read minds allowed?

[ABYSS]

1) I knew you were the same person as Wolf before I even looked at your profiles to compare. Your writing style tipped me off. I was going to say something in Wolfs, but then I finally said it here.

2) Because it was like a site grand opening, and so I was going to ease up on that rule until we got more members.

3) Shadows app, which I gave extreme creative license to, was more thorough and well-written than others. However, despite the creative license, if he used the freedom I granted him to godmod in even the slightest, then I would revoke his privilege of the "White Fury"/Night Fury.

[carodacat]

1) Wow. You really are good.
2) Okay, I understand.
3) Yeah, Shadow seems the type who will respect that.
4) Can I ask, is it possible to have another dragon just for flying?Because you can't fly on a Terrible Terror...

[ABYSS]

1) After a few years of RP Ive noticed trends in the writing styles of others XD

3)I know him in real life, and so I told him that, and he agreed to it. But since he hasnt really been around and is getting ready for college...it doesnt make much of a difference...

4) Well...instead of having a Terrible Terror for your dragon, you can have a dragon that you can fly on, and then say a Terrible Terror that lurks around the house...kind of like a stray animal or something. That would be plausible

[carodacat]

I'll keep the terrible terror, but Hawk has made a kind of hang glider, controlled by Fury who is attached and flies where he wants to go, that he uses to fly around (there was a similar thing in How to ride a Dragon's Storm).

[ABYSS]

please include that at the very end of your application with an asterisk (*) by it so others know that its a note

[ABYSS]

Accepted.