Wolfheart Form

[wolfheart]

NAME: Wolfheart greenblood tummyache the 5th
ALIAS: Wolfheart
AGE: 13
GENDER: Female
STANDING: In-training
SEXUAL ORIENTATION: Straight

LIKES: Dragons, fish, flying, cats (in the books there are cats, so I guess you have them here...)
DISLIKES: Obnoxious people, awkward silences, evil, storms
STRENGTHS: Fast, logical, clever, animals like her
WEAKNESSES: absolutely appalling aim, argumentative, doesn't get on with people, stubborn
FEARS: Her dragon dies, all dragons die, anyone finds out her secret, spiders
AMBITIONS: finish training, meet a SeaDragonus Giganticus Maximus, find out if dragons are edible, meet someone she likes
SECRETS: She is raising a baby Nightmare in her house, she loves her dragon too much.


PERSONALITY: Wolflegs is fast and furious.. with emphasis on the furious. She doesn't get on with ANYONE. She even sometimes argues with her dragon, but normally it is the only thing she will talk to. Nobody is sure of why she is so snappy. Only she knows.

OVERALL PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION: She is quite skinny with short jet-black hair and blue eyes. She has very white skin. She has a dragon tattoo on her arm. No muscles burst through her skin.
(This history is if I get a Night Fury, if I can't I will rewrite it)
HISTORY: Wolfheart grew up in Berk. She was very friendly when she was young, if a little secretive. But one day she was walking in the Wild Zone, looking for Wild Meat, when she saw a huge black dragon lying on the sand, it's flanks heaving. Wolfheart was about to walk away from it when she realized something was stuck in its side.

It was an Axe. As Wolfheart tugged it out, she suddenly realized that any one of her friends could have done this. She saw the markings on the side. The Axe belonged to her brother.

She threw the Axe into the sea, watching as the dragon opened his eyes. It looked at the remains of the Axe sinking, the fury on Wolfheart's face. It studied her for a moment, then growled loudly.

"OK, calm down, good imitation of my fury," Wolfeart muttered, stepping forward. The dragon grinned. "Fury." Wolfheart though about the name. She smiled. So did Fury. There was a storm that night so they curled up in the remains of a ship. The next day Wolfheart took Fury home.

After that Wolfheart was never friendly to anyone apart from Fury. Nobody knew why... but her brother never got his Axe back.

PARENTS, FRIENDS, OTHER FAMILY:
Mother: Piglegs (died in a storm)
Father: Scablout (killed by a Thunderdrum)
Brother: Gideon Axe-thrower (ran away)


WEAPON OF CHOICE: Axe


IF I am allowed a Night Fury:
DRAGON NAME: Fury (Male)
DRAGON TYPE: Night Fury
DRAGON PERSONALITY: Strong and silent, distrusting
DRAGON TECHNIQUES: Excellent flying

Otherwise:
DRAGON NAME: Bucky (Male)
DRAGON TYPE: Nadder
DRAGON PERSONALITY: Friendly and a bit annoying
DRAGON TECHNIQUES: VERY hot fire

KEYWORD IN RULES: *********

[ABYSS]

Hello, and welcome to the site

• First things first, Wolfheart isnt exactly a name. It's a name I'd expect to find in Erin Hunter's Warriors series. "Heart of a Wolf" is fine, but not Wolfheart. So, your alias could be more like "Wolf" or "Heart"
  
• Why would she want to meet a SeaDragonus Giganticus Maximus? Its the biggest and most dangerous dragon (basically...) anyone could ask for. It could have wiped out the earlier Vikings of Berk when they attacked it
  
• Why is she raising a baby Nightmare? Where did she find it? How did she meet it?
  
• I'd like an expansion (not alot, maybe one or two paragraphs) on the personality (go more in depth, she has to have more traits than fast & furious), physical description, and a good expansion on her history. What is the Wild Zone? What is Wild Meat? Tell about her relations with her brother and her parents.
  
• If a dragon had an axe in its side...it likely wouldnt survive. Its like a human walking around with a sword in their side...it must suck.
  
• To be flat-out honest, this is nowhere near standards I would be looking for if you wanted a Night Fury. Also, you should improve on the specified things before you get your character.
  

Dont give up! You can try again!

[wolfheart]

Okie dokie, some answers to your questions.

1. I dunno, it was going to be Wolflegs, would that do? Other wise it will just be Wolf Greenblood Tummyache 5th

2. There we are, an expanding on personality. She is the kind of person that would believe that a Seadrgonus would kill off all the evil people. And sometimes she truly wouldn't care is nobody survives.

3. Ok, forget the Night Fury, the Monstrous Nightmare will do. I'll write about that in the personality.

4. Sorry, I only had like 10 minutes to write it. But now I will do it properly. The Wild Zone is in the game and I believe it is the forest where Hiccup finds toothless. And wild meat is basically sheep and boars (also from the game).

5. It had only been there about an hour... dragons are strong creatures. If a man can walk across a wheat field carrying his severed arm so he could ask someone could call an ambulance (I have no idea why I know that) then I'm sure a dragon could go a while with an axe in its side.

Ok, here is the updated profile. I left out some of the simple things because they can stay the same. BUT I would like to get rid of animals like her from strengths and replace it with she can speak Dragonese.

PERSONALITY: Wolflegs is fast and furious.. with emphasis on the furious. She was friendly once.... long ago. She adored her brother Gideon. But as she grew older, she became more secretive. Her friends tried hard to be nice to her, but she didn't care for them anymore. Her only concern was her dragon. She seemed to have a heart of stone- her father was killed by a Thunderdrum and she didn't shed a single tear. Now she is 13, she shows no sign of softening. If anything, she is getting more quiet and distrusting.

OVERALL PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION: She is quite skinny, with no muscles bursting out of her skin. The only sign that she isn't a weak nerd is the flaming skull tattoo on her left arm. Her hair is jet-black and shoulder-length. Her eyes are as blue as the sea but are filled with darkness. Her skin is a white as the snow and her cheeks are lightly freckled.

HISTORY: Wolf was born on Raven's Peak, a small island near Berk, in the middle of a snowstorm. Her mother, Piglegs, carried her back to the house but died soon after, so Wolf never knew her mother. She was brought up by her father Scablout, leader
of the Raven tribe, but when she was 5 a Thunderdrum found it's way into her home.
Her father killed it, but it dragged him down too, eating the leader as it died. Wolf's brother, Gideon, became leader. His Monstrous Nightmare was a brilliant silver but very aggressive.
Wolf was only twelve when her brother called an attack on the main dragon nest. She was forced to participate because she was the fastest of all the children.
The battle was a mistake. As Wolf threw her first Axe, it got jammed into a tree a meter away from where she was aiming. Nobody noticed in the general hubbub, but Gideon looked angry.
As Wolf was standing there, wondering where to begin, a flash of silver caught her eye. Her brother's dragon had pinned down a smaller Nightmare and was about to kill it. Wolf didn't know why she did it. Her hands tugged at her Axe and she threw it through the air. She had been aiming for the dragon's side, but she hit its head, letting the smaller Nightmare escape. It was also silver. It turned round and hissed, "You won't kill me this time, brother!" Just as it was running free, Gideon flew at it, knocking it down.
"Come on Wolf, kill it!" he screeched. But Wolf couldn't. It was too beautiful.
Gideon hissed with anger when he realized she wasn't going to. "I'll kill you, traitor!" he yelled. The Nightmare slapped Gideon with it's tail and put Wolf on his back. "Please... let's run away!" Wolf begged. The dragon nodded and took off, saying as it flew, "On Berk, dragons are friends."
The two landed on Berk two days later, starving and tired. The villagers were impressed and took them in. From that day on, Wolf has been training in Berk. She never talks about her past.

And I will need a new dragon form...
DRAGON NAME: Nayrol, alias Nai (Male)
DRAGON TYPE: Monstrous Nightmare
DRAGON PERSONALITY: Strong and silent, distrusting but very loyal to Wolf
DRAGON TECHNIQUES: Excellent flying, incredibly determined if not very strong

Thank you!

[ABYSS]

You can take what you just showed me there ^^ and modify your application with the new stuff

Ill give everything another look-over when thats done :0

[wolfheart]

Ok, here is the whole thing:
NAME: Wolf greenblood tummyache the 5th
ALIAS: Wolf
AGE: 13
GENDER: Female
STANDING: In-training
SEXUAL ORIENTATION: Straight

LIKES: Dragons, fish, flying, cats (in the books there are cats, so I guess you have them here...)
DISLIKES: Obnoxious people, awkward silences, evil, storms
STRENGTHS: Fast, logical, clever, animals like her
WEAKNESSES: absolutely appalling aim, argumentative, doesn't get on with people, stubborn
FEARS: Her dragon dies, all dragons die, anyone finds out her secret, spiders
AMBITIONS: finish training, meet a SeaDragonus Giganticus Maximus, find out if dragons are edible, meet someone she likes
SECRETS: She once killed a Night Fury (she was throwing axes at trees and hit it), she loves her dragon too much.

PERSONALITY: Wolf is fast and furious.. with emphasis on the furious. She was friendly once.... long ago. She adored her brother Gideon. But as she grew older, she became more secretive. Her friends tried hard to be nice to her, but she didn't care for them anymore. Her only concern was her dragon. She seemed to have a heart of stone- her father was killed by a Thunderdrum and she didn't shed a single tear. Now she is 13, she shows no sign of softening. If anything, she is getting more quiet and distrusting.

OVERALL PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION: She is quite skinny, with no muscles bursting out of her skin. The only sign that she isn't a weak nerd is the flaming skull tattoo on her left arm. Her hair is jet-black and shoulder-length. Her eyes are as blue as the sea but are filled with darkness. Her skin is a white as the snow and her cheeks are lightly freckled.

HISTORY: Wolf was born on Raven's Peak, a small island near Berk, in the middle of a snowstorm. Her mother, Piglegs, carried her back to the house but died soon after, so Wolf never knew her mother. She was brought up by her father Scablout, leader
of the Raven tribe, but when she was 5 a Thunderdrum found it's way into her home.
Her father killed it, but it dragged him down too, eating the leader as it died. Wolf's brother, Gideon, became leader. His Monstrous Nightmare was a brilliant silver but very aggressive.
Wolf was only twelve when her brother called an attack on the main dragon nest. She was forced to participate because she was the fastest of all the children.
The battle was a mistake. As Wolf threw her first Axe, it got jammed into a tree a meter away from where she was aiming. Nobody noticed in the general hubbub, but Gideon looked angry.
As Wolf was standing there, wondering where to begin, a flash of silver caught her eye. Her brother's dragon had pinned down a smaller Nightmare and was about to kill it. Wolf didn't know why she did it. Her hands tugged at her Axe and she threw it through the air. She had been aiming for the dragon's side, but she hit its head, letting the smaller Nightmare escape. It was also silver. It turned round and hissed, "You won't kill me this time, brother!" Just as it was running free, Gideon flew at it, knocking it down.
"Come on Wolf, kill it!" he screeched. But Wolf couldn't. It was too beautiful.
Gideon hissed with anger when he realized she wasn't going to. "I'll kill you, traitor!" he yelled. The Nightmare slapped Gideon with it's tail and put Wolf on his back. "Please... let's run away!" Wolf begged. The dragon nodded and took off, saying as it flew, "On Berk, dragons are friends."
The two landed on Berk two days later, starving and tired. The villagers were impressed and took them in. From that day on, Wolf has been training in Berk. She never talks about her past.

DRAGON NAME: Nayrol, alias Nai (Male)
DRAGON TYPE: Monstrous Nightmare
DRAGON PERSONALITY: Strong and silent, distrusting but very loyal to Wolf
DRAGON TECHNIQUES: Excellent flying, incredibly determined if not very strong

[ABYSS]

Pretty good, but only village leaders are allowed to have Monstrous Nightmares because of how potentially dangerous they are :/

Thats my only qualm~

[wolfheart]

True, but she was next-in-line of her old tribe, because her brother Gideon had one
Plus, Snotlout got one, so I guess she could still keep it...

[ABYSS]

Even if she was next in line, she still wasnt an actual leader.
and Snotlout got one in the movie, but as much as I think it would be plausible for someone that wasnt a leader to have a Nightmare, we can say times changed or something, because Nightmares were very dangerous.

Also, two small things I spotted in a re-read that I didnt last night.

1) Silver nightmare? they're more of a mix of reds, oranges, yellows, blacks and browns...no silver, really.
2)Also, how did Nai speak? Dragons dont speak in a way humans understand....(very easily, save for select few)

[wolfheart]

Phew, this is taking a while. She didn't really plan to get a Nightmare, she flew away on one in battle. Plus, they arrived two days later, even though it only takes a few hours of flight. Wolf tamed Nai and told him not to attack anyone. Nai is distrusting but he is incredibly loyal to Wolf and would never disobey her. She promised on arrival she would stay by his side at all times.
1. In the book, the son of Hysteria (or something like that) tribe leader had a silver Nightmare called Killer. If that isn't true then I'll have the standard colour.
2. Aagh, I didn't put in the full she could speak dragonese I did say she could in the updated version, not the full.

[ABYSS]

1) ...wow, Ive never read the books. point to yous.

2) Okay, understandable.

Ill accept this. Do be sure to sport some good RPs~
I'll be reading ^^