Fredrick the Ferocious

[Fredrick the Ferocious third]

FREDRICK THE "FEROCIOUS" the Third


Fredrick the "Ferocious" III

ORIGINS
Location Berk
Birthdate 5/15/1809
Age 19

Raised by well-respected dragon trainers of Berk, Fredrick has learned most of what he knows about dragons from his parents.
Ever since the age of 10 Fredrick was sticking his nose in places it shouldn’t be.

One such incident occurred when he was 12 years old when his parents had left him alone in the dragon training arena, while they had gone off to take care of other matters. Curious as to what a terrible terror was he decided to open up the terrible terror’s pen.

By the time his parents returned, they found the dragon outside its pen and on him not hurting him but just licking him to death.

After seeing this, his father was angry with him and gave him one lesson that he would never forget. From that moment on Fredrick has always had a dislike for terrible terrors. After this experience his father thought it would benefit him to learn dragon training so now on certain days of the week he will help his father in the arena.

When he was 15 years old; his mother taught him about dragon nip and how it’s used for in training dragons. Being the son of dragon trainers he decided that he wanted to start cultivating it.

GENDER & SEXUALITY
Straight
Male

OCCUPATION
Unemployed


TRAITS

STRENGTHS:

▪ Intelligent
▪ Creative
▪ Charming
▪ Independent

WEAKNESSES:

▪ Curious
▪ Arrogant
▪ Lazy
▪ Condescending

LIKES:

▪ Learning about dragons
▪ Practicing combat skills
▪ Watching the clouds
▪ Stargazing
DISLIKES:

▪ Terrible terrors
▪ Onions
▪ Fishing
▪ Woodcutting

FEARS:
▪ losing his axe
▪ His house being raided by a terrible terror
▪ becoming shipwrecked on an island
▪ becoming lost in the forest AMBITIONS:

▪ Taming a night Fury
▪ Become a dragon trainer
▪ become one of the best axe throwers in town

SECRETS:

▪ Keeps a journal identifying different mushrooms in the wild
▪ encountered a night fury and lived to tell the tale (or not)

OVERALL PERSONALITY
Being outside most of the time Fredrick has learned to be independent, but this has had a negative effect on him making him very arrogant and confident about himself and his skills.

This has backfired on him many times when he’s taken on more than he can handle and ended up making himself look like a fool. This has also earned him the nickname “Ferocious” because he will often charge into a situation without thinking about it very much beforehand.

However on the flip side Fredrick learned to read from a very young age making him knwagble in many subjects as he would spend his time inside reading books on a wide variety of subjects.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION
Blonde hair, hazel eyes and very muscular and weighing 200 lbs. Around 5’’8’ Fredrick is a little shorter than the average Viking but makes up for his lack of height with his physical prowess.
He wears mainly a shirt with a leather vest either thick long pants or light shorts depending on his activity,
when he helps his dad train dragons he will wear a helmet with a visor shoulder pads and forearm protectors thick leather pants and heavy duty boots and optional chainmail armor,

FIGHT TO THE DEATH
WEAPON(S) OF CHOICE:

▪ A combat axe made by his father for his 18th birthday
▪ either and arrow or dagger kept on him

Keyword BARF NBEICH

OCC jman

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You're missing the keyword and your OOC name from the application template. They Keyword can be found by reading the rules. I will review this when this has been done.

You also need to change your display name to that of your character's.

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Lets get this baby sorted! There's a few things we need to look at:

First of all, we don't need a year for a birthdate. The year is unspecified in the canon, thus it remains unspecified here.

What was the lesson his father gave him? If his mother taught him to cultivate dragon nip, and he's interested in it, wouldn't his job be a farmer of the plant? It seems to make sense...

You have a few contradicting strengths and weaknesses. How can he be charming and condescending at the same time? If he was lazy, why would he be bothered enough to get his nose stuck in places that it shouldn't?

If he is intelligent, why would he run head first into a situation without analysing? If he's an outside person, surely he wouldn't have his nose in a book, unless that was only during his childhood?

Please put his night fury experience in the history, if you choose to have it. But no one-on-one experiences. That's awful sue-y. A wild night fury is not going to reveal itself to a human to let it have a chance to stab it in the face. It wouldn't know that Berk is friendly. They are also super-rare so the chances of seeing one anyway is awfully slim.

I think that's it for now, I'll check this later when you've made these fixes, make a post to let me know that its been modified