Luna

[Luna Heiler & Ayer]

NAME- Luna
ALIAS- N/A
AGE- 15
GENDER- female
STANDING -dragon healer
SEXUAL ORIENTATION- strait



LIKES
Shells and feathers
Rain
Cool weather
Stargazing

DISLIKES
Dragon abuse
Starless nights
Insomnia
Crowds 


STRENGTHS
Knife throwing
Dragon behavior/healing skills
Determination 
Will never cave and give away secrets- weather they be hers or someone else's 

WEAKNESSES
Afraid of heights so no flying dragons
Not the best fighter
Has a hard time killing


FEARS
Hights
Failure
Close combat
Afraid of letting any dragon die because of what she couldn't do

AMBITIONS
Become the best dragon healer berk has and will ever see
Find love
Save lives of dragons
Eventually overcome her fear of heights

SECRETS
Her father Is the leader of the bulky beefs, and she was born on hysteria

PERSONALITY

Luna is a shy and introverted girl. She daydreams a lot and has insomnia. When she cant sleep she goes up on her roof and stargazes or walks along the beach. She collects feathers and shells and bits of glass and the like. She has a crazy fear of heights. She is more comfortable around dragons than people. She has a strangely close connection with the beasts and has been bonding with them them from the age of 7.


OVERALL PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION:

Luna has light skin with freckles and red-blonde hair with feathers in it. she has blue-violet eyes. She has a very feminine build. She wears a dark cream linen shirt that comes to her elbows with a brown one under it and leather straps tied around her wrists. She has a brown fur vest over her shirt. Green skirt, gray leggings, raspberry colored sash. Her boots have a charm hanging off of them made of feathers


HISTORY

Luna was not born on the isle of berk. Her father is the leader of hysteria.She was training to be a healer, a great honor but she never felt happy because she felt it was wrong to harm, or for that matter kill dragons. She always became very upset when there was an attack, she could never sleep hearing the gory sounds of people brutally murdering  the magnificent creatures (the stress from this caused the insomnia, which she still suffers from today eventhough none of this happens around her anymore)  and Could never fit in with any of the kids on hysteria (I hope this is not starting to sound too much like hiccup because I'm not trying to make it that way) so when she was 10, she finally decided she could not take it any more- she had to leave. For weeks she planned her escape, she found a small vessel she could steal and kept any dried meat of fruit she was given for provisions, and she stole some maps of the area. One night, she finally was ready to execute her plan. At midnight, she gathered her belongings and silently slipped out of the house. She quietly maneuvered the vessel out of the bay and set out for open sea, with only the maps and the stars to guide her. For many days he was out at sea, but eventually she arrived on the shores of the isle of berk. When asked where she was from, she lied and said she was from a different neighboring village called Glent. Berk was amazing for her. what she had been dying to do in public for 3 years now was acceptable. One night, Asthers dragon was fatally ill, and was close to death. The village people had seen lunas way with the beasts, and they thought perhaps she could help. She protested and asked them all what good she was, what she could do- they told Her to remember her training as healer and let her instincts with the dragons guide her. She went nervously over to asther's home and asked of she could help. She said she would allow it. Luna immediatly went to work, giving the creature herbs and covering it with blankets to keep it's body temperature up. She stayed up with it all night, and in the morning, the dragon was no longer close to death. As a reward for saving her dragon, Asther allowed Luna to become the official berk dragon healer.

Luna found her two dragons- Snatcher and Snip, abandoned by their mother and less than 3 days old. She raised them and owns them both.

PARENTS, FRIENDS, OTHER FAMILY- all of Luna's family lives on the island she was born on. She doesn't have many friends, she gets along better with dragons.

WEAPON OF CHOICE-
Knife

DRAGON NAME-Snatcher
DRAGON TYPE- terrible terror
DRAGON PERSONALITY- snatcher is mischievous and often picks small tiffs with other dragons and is very playful. He us fiercely loyal to Luna and his sister, Snip. He is more insependent than his sister. He is red with brown.
DRAGON TECHNIQUES- Snatcher can sniff out things very well

DRAGON NAME-Snip
DRAGON TYPE-terrible terror
DRAGON PERSONALITY Snip is very dependent on Luna, she is usually following her around. She is endearing and gentle, but very sly when shes playing. She is purple with orange
DRAGON TECHNIQUES- Snip can jump exceptionally high.

KEYWORD IN RULES- *********

[ABYSS]

Alrighty. *claps hands* Lets get started, shall we?

Weaknesses - how is knowing more about dragons than others a weakness?

Secrets - that 'far away land' is Hysteria, and the vikings there are known as (at least to the site anyway XD) as the Bulky Beefs, just as Berk's vikings are known as Hairy Hooligans.

Personality - why is she an insomniac? I wouldnt say 'taming' dragons since 7, given that is quite young. However...Ill accept something more along the lines of 'bonding'.

Physical Description - Im pretty good with all of this except the charm on her boots. They're vikings, after all. They're not dressed for fashion. unless the charm is like a shard of rock, or a tiny uncut gem she found on the beach, or something of the like.

History - ......yeah no being thrown off a cliff. the weight alone from the amount of gravity bearing down on how much velocity she would have accumulated from the height of a cliff into water would be enough to shatter her bones and kill her. especially at that age. Even for a testosterone-ridden viking, throwing their own daughter off a cliff is extreme. And at that age, thats when younger villagers are explained the ways of the village/tribe/whathaveyou and they learn to do something one way or another. if her father found her helping a dragon, he would probably have told her thats not how they do things. also, Hysteria is on the complete opposite side of the Rath of Thor from Berk.....there wont be any Berk fishing boats out there. Also, the Leader of Berk currently, is Asther.

Basically...the whole start of the history isnt going to fly, so she's going to have to have some other method of getting to Berk.


Other than what was specified, it looks okay. Just be sure to run everything through a word processor spelling/grammar check function ^^

[ABYSS]

Weaknesses, Physical Description & Secrets - M'kay.

Personality - why is she an insomniac?


History - .....5 is...really young to become distraught and be competent enough in that situation to decide to leave, much less take to a dragon and get it to fly her across the open sea, especially when she's never flown a dragon before in her life. If anything, make it 10 years old, but I would suggest something more feasible such as stealing a boat from the village dock and setting out on her own (with provisions, mind you) across the sea.

Overall - again with the word processor check/self-check. Im spotting a good number of grammatical, spelling, and syntax errors. Although they are by no means horrid, some people may not understand what you are trying to say.

Thats it for round 2 ^^

[Luna Heiler & Ayer]

I just wanted to make a point about the insomniac thing, they probably would not have had real medical explanations for these things, so can we just leave it at she has insomnia?

[ABYSS]

Alright, the reason for getting to Berk is more solid. That's good. However, she arrived at Berk when she was 10, and currently she's 15. They wouldnt instantly make her their Dragon Healer, so, maybe put a bit more in her history about how she gained the trust of the villagers and realized herself how she could help dragons? They wouldnt accept somebody completely random out of the blue.

Other than that its looking good ^^

[Luna Heiler & Ayer]

Ok, you need to reread the whole history, I tweaked the whole thing

[ABYSS]

There we go. Thats more like it.

Welcome to Berk. you may now start RPing.